75. Mirror [100 poems challenge]

75.          Mirror

I
Am here
And there
Simultaneously
There and here
Am I.

9 July 2013

Comments: I don’t quite have the time, energy and/or brain-power to construct a better version of this idea at the moment. However, since this is pretty weak, the following is my attempt at something vaguely resembling chiasmus. I had promised chiasmus, many days ago.

 
Look at you:
To me it seems
You’re just the same,
But I wonder
What you might be thinking
As you look at me
And see me staring,
Thoughts hidden
And mysterious,
Perhaps identical,
But can you tell
By watching me?

9 July 2013

Themes to come: 76. Broken Pieces; 77. Test; 78. Drink; 79. Starvation; 80. Words

Explanation about the 100 poems challenge here.