53. Keeping a Secret
Whisper me this,
Trust me with that,
Your secrets are safe, you can bet.
I won’t dismiss
From bag: a cat —
Your secrets I simply forget.
10 June 2013
Comments: I don’t think I’ve quite managed to carry this one off. I feel that it needs to be this short, but it’s hard to find a tight sequence of words that tell the whole story. These words almost get there … but not quite IMHO.
Themes to come: 54. Tower; 55. Waiting; 56. Danger Ahead; 57. Sacrifice; 58. Kick in the Head
Explanation about the 100 poems challenge here.
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